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I like it! That heron haiku is sooo deep it is a huge platform for writing a song from.
How should we tag these songs?
How should we tag these songs?
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Be aware that there is the long-running FAWMku thread for haiku triers, although it tends to be a sparring match or witty/2 responses rather than inspiration!
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Thanks @timfatchen ! The idea in this challenge is to create a tune and use the posted haiku as an inspiration. To create something new out of the mood of the Haiku.
I plan to post traditional Haikus or new Haikus based on the traditional Japanese way to write them.
I plan to post traditional Haikus or new Haikus based on the traditional Japanese way to write them.
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Yes. Tentatively interested. We'll see how many challenges I commit to, lol. But I got a really nice song out of a poetry prompt last year, so this is promising.
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Pen in hand, words flow
Melody takes shape in mind
Songwriting magic
--ChatGPT
Melody takes shape in mind
Songwriting magic
--ChatGPT
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Yes! und Ja!
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The gates will open tomorrow and I want to post the first Haiku now, so if you are interested create anything you want to out of the mood and the atmosphere of this wonderful poetry:
#Haiku1
Pflaumenblütenduft -
mächtig bricht die Sonne hervor
über dem Bergweg
plum blossom scent -
powerful the sun breaks through
over the mountain path
Matsui Basho' (1644 - 1694)
@nancycunning @datsch @safred @florianhoffmann @tawny249
#Haiku1
Pflaumenblütenduft -
mächtig bricht die Sonne hervor
über dem Bergweg
plum blossom scent -
powerful the sun breaks through
over the mountain path
Matsui Basho' (1644 - 1694)
@nancycunning @datsch @safred @florianhoffmann @tawny249
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Ooh, a classical one from Japan. Powerful nature imagery. 👍
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Oh what an amazing haiku!!!!!!! Powerful indeed. Thank you <3
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@datsch @safred @tawny249 @florianhoffmann @beebalm7000
Here is #Haiku2:
Bergwald - zwischen Bäumen
glänzt tief unten klares Wasser
Sommermonat
Mountain forest - between trees
deep below clear water shines
month of summer
Tagawa Ho'ro' (1762 - 1845)
Have fun!
Here is #Haiku2:
Bergwald - zwischen Bäumen
glänzt tief unten klares Wasser
Sommermonat
Mountain forest - between trees
deep below clear water shines
month of summer
Tagawa Ho'ro' (1762 - 1845)
Have fun!
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@safred @florianhoffmann @datsch @queenie @tawny249 @beebalm7000
So, here is one of my favorite Haikus!
#Haiku3
Schwebt da eine abgefallene
Blüte an den Ast zurück?
.... Ah, ein Schmetterling!
Does a fallen
flower float back to the branch?
.... Ah, a butterfly!
Arakida Moritake (1473 - 1549)
Have fun!
So, here is one of my favorite Haikus!
#Haiku3
Schwebt da eine abgefallene
Blüte an den Ast zurück?
.... Ah, ein Schmetterling!
Does a fallen
flower float back to the branch?
.... Ah, a butterfly!
Arakida Moritake (1473 - 1549)
Have fun!
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@safred @florianhoffmann @datsch @queenie @tawny249 @beebalm7000
Here comes #Haiku4:
verfallener Tempel -
der grimmige Wächter am Tor
überwuchert von jungem Laub
decayed tempel -
the fierce guardian at the gate
overgrown with young leaves
by Sassa Seisetsu (1872 - 1917)
Have fun!
Here comes #Haiku4:
verfallener Tempel -
der grimmige Wächter am Tor
überwuchert von jungem Laub
decayed tempel -
the fierce guardian at the gate
overgrown with young leaves
by Sassa Seisetsu (1872 - 1917)
Have fun!
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@timfatchen could you link that haiku thread here as this was what came up when I was looking for it!
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Go ahaed! I am looking forward to read or hear something from you! 😊
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This is a great idea - and the haikus are beautiful. I will see what comes up...
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I'm workimg on a set of illustrations for a Haiku book. 4 down and 24 more to go. I'm hoping to be finished in a couple of months.
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Ok, the falling flower/butterfly haiku inspired this one: https://write.fawm.org/songs/16146
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My idea is to post an traditional or modern Haiku every day or every second day in English and in German. It is an invitation for you to take this Haiku as an inspiration for a new track. There is no special genre needed. It could be Punk, Soul, Ambient or what ever it inspires you to. The result can be a track or some new lyrics out of the mood of the Haiku. No limits at all.
I will post it like this: Haiku#1, Haiku#2 and so on. So the tag will be Haiku# and then the number.
I took this idea from a record label in UK Naviar Records (you find it on SoundCloud) and I created one ambient tune out of the mood of one Haiku they posted (they send you a new Haiku every Wednesday in an email). It turned out into an ambient tune (which was no surprise for me) but there where also some pretty experimental tunes.
So here is one example:
without a voice
the heron would disappear –
morning snow
by Fukuda Chiyo-ni
https://soundcloud.com/user-62342567/the-heron-naviarhaiku459?si=75f679e045204cc6aff8053e44603a41&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
So what do you think about this idea? Is anybody interested?