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Somewhere Over The Rainbow is my stock answer for this question! You only need to hear the first two notes of the melody and you know what it is. Which is kinda genius. And like yours, I just think it’s overall very close to the perfect song.
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Bohemian Rhapsody. I love the complexity, the weirdness, the epicness and everybody knows it even after all these years...
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"Night of the Swallow" by Kate Bush. Pretty much perfection as far as I'm concerned. Great story-telling lyrics; decent level of structural and musical complexity and still with a great lift into a very catchy chorus. The epitome of intelligent pop writing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=61UZj0IxKxg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=61UZj0IxKxg
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@davidtaro - and those two notes are an octave apart - aren't they?
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A hard question! I'll go this time with Banshee by Kendra Morris
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn5CfRrCrIs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn5CfRrCrIs
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Lesson in Survival, by Joni Mitchell. It's got all the strong imagery I love so much in songwriting, all hung around a pure heartbreaking core. I could've said a lot of songs, but all of them were Joni.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6cxxPKIXSY
@atitlan - frickin' *great* choice.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6cxxPKIXSY
@atitlan - frickin' *great* choice.
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Same as @nadine . Bohemian Rhapsody is a song I consider perfect. I'm not even a Queen fan particularly, but BR is just... perfect.
I'd love to be able to write something like that, but in my preferred genres of goth or metal. Suspect I'd need to do it in a band rather than solo.
Maybe one day...
I'd love to be able to write something like that, but in my preferred genres of goth or metal. Suspect I'd need to do it in a band rather than solo.
Maybe one day...
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Nessun dorma. A hundred years old and still blows people's minds, critiques and everyday listeners alike.
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Waterloo Sunset!
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Long, Long Time made popular by Linda Ronstadt. I cry every time I hear it, and I've been wanting to cover it for a while. I was floored when it was featured in The Last of Us. I hope tiktok gives it the Fleetwood Mac treatment.
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@oddbod i believe so!
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Bigmouth Strikes Again by The Smiths. I want to have written that song, and then I want to be Morrissey and Johnny Marr combined so I can play it and sing it
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Nick Drake's Way to Blue. Most of my songs are me trying to write that. Also Dolly Parton's Jolene.
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All I want for Christmas is you
I'd never have to work again 😎
I'd never have to work again 😎
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@adforperu ha ha yes, if only for monetary reasons I was thinking something like Yesterday
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Nothing by my heroes. If I'd written any of those greats songs by Ministry or Bjork or Prince or PJ Harvey, they wouldn't mean the same thing to me, and they wouldn't be the staples of their fans' musical diet.
I admire songs by friends – @ductapeguy's Beer Drone, @crutherford's Stuff, paul court's Shadows, and a recent song by Roy Hickling – songs so good and so personally relatable that I ask for their blessing to play them, because they feel like home <3
I admire songs by friends – @ductapeguy's Beer Drone, @crutherford's Stuff, paul court's Shadows, and a recent song by Roy Hickling – songs so good and so personally relatable that I ask for their blessing to play them, because they feel like home <3
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Take 5 by Dave Brubeck.
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Whiter Shade of Pale for me.
I think the music was based on some Classical piece... not sure.
Procol Harum always had some interesting lyrics from their lyricist Keith Reid.
I think the music was based on some Classical piece... not sure.
Procol Harum always had some interesting lyrics from their lyricist Keith Reid.
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@davidtaro - Somewhere Over The Rainbow or... Starman! (Though apparently it was quite a conscious borrowing on Bowie's part, so maybe your point stands.) If you haven't done it before I'd recommend coming up with a melody that starts the same way as an exercise - it is quite interesting - and hard!
[edit: oh, and to answer the question, I don't know. I'm quite partial to Avril 14th by Aphex Twin, and it is basically a parasitic co-occupant of my skull.]
[edit: oh, and to answer the question, I don't know. I'm quite partial to Avril 14th by Aphex Twin, and it is basically a parasitic co-occupant of my skull.]
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Cotton Eye Joe
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ooo now you're asking this is a hard one, but I think I'd opt for one of my favourite songs "To love somebody" by the Bee Gees (and covered by many others). Nothing beats an unrequited love song, especially not one like this with strong melodies and clear, emotive lyrics
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"Monster Mash" obviously.
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"Did I Shave My Legs for This" by Deana Carter. Not even because it is a particularly special song but because I so wished I had the guts to put the line "did I shave my legs for this" in a song and not think it is utterly stupid and the world would laugh at me.
Maybe I should say "any country song" because the genre's ability to just say things in plain terms, not expect every song lyric to be as delicately woven as Joni Mitchell or Emily Saliers (both of whom I adore, btw), and not be ashamed of that is something I can only dream of.
Maybe I should say "any country song" because the genre's ability to just say things in plain terms, not expect every song lyric to be as delicately woven as Joni Mitchell or Emily Saliers (both of whom I adore, btw), and not be ashamed of that is something I can only dream of.
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Oh, @scottmcb - I stole a record (well, was just very, very slow in returning it after a sleepover) with Monster Mash on it. Also had the Flying Purple People Eater - I spent most of third grade trying to work out if the people were purple or the eater....But if I had to pick one it would be Desperados Waiting For a Train. No, wait Dublin Blues, well maybe Step Inside this House, or LA Freeway or Stuff That Works or Hanging Your Life on the Wall. Okay, I'd be happy to be a co-writer on any one of Guy Clark's zillion songs.
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Bastards of the Young.
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I had some dreams playing these awesome songs... Well there they are
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@ahasuerus Phonecall For Stelly
https://on.soundcloud.com/evAu9
Ahasuerus is one of my friends, going back 9 years to an Anime/Manga message board, and we started making music around the same time in 2016. Although he didn't know how to play guitar (and he never tuned the thing) all that much in the beginning his sense of melody was always there. Some people have a natural sense of melody, he has it and I don't.
When he made this song I asked what the chords were because I wanted to cover it and he told me E and C. I said those weren't right and he sent me two pictures of his hands fretting the chords.
E and E with the finger on the A string removed.
It was so simple I wanted to scream.
I was amazed that without any real knowledge of guitar he made this great tune that was so dead simple and yet so good. I have played/sung this song many times on acoustic, I have performed it to people and everyone thinks it's cool. I did it at the last FAWMSTOCK to end my set.
Proper full production songs are just unobtainable. Yes I could say I wish I wrote Bruce's Backstreets, The Clash's Lost In The Supermarket, The Who's So Sad About Us, Sonic Youth's 'Cross The Breeze, The Smiths' Ask, The Teenager Kissers' Wendy etc. but really I wish I had come up with Ahasuerus' brilliant little two chord tune.
https://on.soundcloud.com/evAu9
Ahasuerus is one of my friends, going back 9 years to an Anime/Manga message board, and we started making music around the same time in 2016. Although he didn't know how to play guitar (and he never tuned the thing) all that much in the beginning his sense of melody was always there. Some people have a natural sense of melody, he has it and I don't.
When he made this song I asked what the chords were because I wanted to cover it and he told me E and C. I said those weren't right and he sent me two pictures of his hands fretting the chords.
E and E with the finger on the A string removed.
It was so simple I wanted to scream.
I was amazed that without any real knowledge of guitar he made this great tune that was so dead simple and yet so good. I have played/sung this song many times on acoustic, I have performed it to people and everyone thinks it's cool. I did it at the last FAWMSTOCK to end my set.
Proper full production songs are just unobtainable. Yes I could say I wish I wrote Bruce's Backstreets, The Clash's Lost In The Supermarket, The Who's So Sad About Us, Sonic Youth's 'Cross The Breeze, The Smiths' Ask, The Teenager Kissers' Wendy etc. but really I wish I had come up with Ahasuerus' brilliant little two chord tune.
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Wichita Lineman. Just for that single couplet alone. You know the one.
Also, Westbourne Avenue! (By Hoopshank)
Also, Westbourne Avenue! (By Hoopshank)
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Currently, I would have to say Dancing After Death by Matt Maeson
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Which ever song would have made me enough money to ditch the 9 to 5 and keep writing songs all day! But probably have to kinda go with an album here instead of a song. I am completely in awe of what Tom Schulz did on the first Boston album. The idea that he wrote all the parts and performed them almost entirely himself in his studio that he built and when he couldn't find a tone he was after. He designed a pedal or piece of recording equipment to do it. Then to end up with a sonic masterpiece. Totally blows me away.
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So many great examples above. This will sound weird coming from a guitar player but Bolero by Pavel which was written almost a hundred years ago.. The slow buildup, instrumentation, the repetitiveness the ending...classic!
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For me, it's 'Vincent' by Don McLean.
A rare inversion where a word paints a thousand pictures.
A rare inversion where a word paints a thousand pictures.
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There are plenty of great songs I wish I wrote, but know I could never come close purely for instrumental skill/talent reasons. But a song I wish I wrote which I also feel would be within my grasp is probably... anything off Weezer's first two albums!
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"The Loneliness & The Scream" by Frightened Rabbit. I also sometimes wished I sang in a Scottish accent, but that's a different thing.
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Lost in the Stars (Weill/Brecht)
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@nancycunning i would like to have written guy clarks desperadoes waiting for a train. i feel like i have lived it, and whenever i get the notion, i can pick up my guitar and sing it.
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'You Say You Don't Love Me' by Buzzcocks.
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I can’t stand her generally but DAMN I wish I’d written “Trouble” by Taylor Swift. So catchy.
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Mull of Kintyre by Paul McCartney, because I'd have made such a crapton of money I could just make the music I love for the rest of my life and never worry about cash flow ever again 😜
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@charliecheney - Aw, yeah... I still get a lump in my throat every time with that song.
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Randomly enough, “I Only Want To Be With You”, performed by Dusty Springfield and written by Mike Hawker and Ivor Raymonde. I can’t think of a more perfect song. Other than that, loads of dance tracks I wish were in my skills and imagination!
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Ocean Breathes Salty by Modest Mouse.
It tells a beautiful story and has complexities in the instruments that I couldn't begin to comprehend. His vocal delivery is so distinct and unforgiving in a way that I would feel embarrassed to replicate. All around perfect song in my opinion.
It tells a beautiful story and has complexities in the instruments that I couldn't begin to comprehend. His vocal delivery is so distinct and unforgiving in a way that I would feel embarrassed to replicate. All around perfect song in my opinion.
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Nine Inch Nails - Hurt. Such a haunting melody. I get goosebumps every time I hear it. The Johnny Cash version is also sublime
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impossible but @downburst waterloo sunset is around there! and @stephenwordsmith Vincent yup and out of left field and i guess the one - Till it shines by Bob Seger. My what an awesome play list from this thread!
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I don't know about "wish I'd written," but there are lyrics I hear where I wish I could work at that level, notably "Emperor Penguin" and "Escape is at Hand for the Travelin' Man" by Tragically Hip, and just about anything by Elvis Costello.
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Neptune by S. J. Tucker. It's as close to perfect as I can imagine, technically and composition-wise, while still being in vaguely the genre that I write in. It's ethereal and raw at the same time. Go look it up. If I want to be completely unrealistic, and go outside my own style of lyrics and music, Dragonfly by The Cruxshadows. It uses techniques I never will, like spoken word clips, and heavy synth, but that violin though, and.... Yeah. Mmm.
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I "wish I had written" whatever I'm stuck on at the moment :-D
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That is so easy to answer.....anything recorded by the Beatles!
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“He Stopped Loving Her Today”, written by Bobby Braddock and Curly Putman, but made famous by George Jones. Second place is “Whenever you Come Around” by Vince Gill.
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@dgiarrap you're so valid for that
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i'd have to say anything by bob dylan, especially off of blood on the tracks
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Feels a bit lame to say, but it's got to be Hallelujah (Cohen, not Handel). It's everywhere, and I never get bored.
Also, I love Secret Heart so much!
Also, I love Secret Heart so much!
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"Going Home," the theme song from the film "Local Hero." (Mark Knopfler)
The perfect theme from the perfect movie.
The perfect theme from the perfect movie.
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@cheslain posted a song, Pylons, that reminded me of Guy Garvey’s vocal quality and today I spun a greatest hits album by Elbow; “Magnificent” came on and I was reminded of just how fantastic that song is in so many different ways. I’m sad that I came to Elbow late in life. Such a song. If I ever could pen and perform just one song like that in my life…. I think I could maybe even put the guitars down and close the cover on the piano and be happy. A magnum opus.
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"hey you got drugs" by Tove Lo
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There are many wonderful songs out there I would have wished I had written if I was a musician, some of which have already been mentioned in this thread further above... However, if I had to decide, one of them, for sure, would be "Hotel California" by The Eagles, for several reasons... First of all, I love songs that have a strong melody and a "classic" structure, and that one has a truly beautiful and memorable tune with a strong chorus. But it is not only about the music here... As a lyricist I pay special attention also to the words, which are really awesome in that song. Apart from, of course, a flowless flow (which is a conditio sine qua non for any song) they contain some really beautiful and partly highly metaphorical imagery. And also, they tell a story... Everyone is able to write a few nicely sounding but little coherent words and sell them as "lyrics", that is no problem, but really quality song writing starts with being able to really tell a story in your song, and that is exactly what happens in "Hotel California", but not in too an obvious way, but in a way, that still keeps its own secrets and leaves it up to the listener to discover them. And finally, although members of the band denied there was a parallel to their real life, the allusions to their autobiographical traits are palpable, which adds a lovely bit of mystery to the song.
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Anything from The Postal Service. Doesn't matter what song. I always wanted to make music like that.
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I wish I wrote this NSFW song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4RAI3jQy9k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4RAI3jQy9k
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“Angel From Montgomery,” John Prine.
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I'd rather be blind by Etta James
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For a song with a social message? Undoubtedly: "The Green Fields of France" by Eric Bogel. It's the most powerful anti-war song ever written.
For personal song which allows you into someone else's head, almost anything by Joni. (but I have a special fondness for "The Same Situation" and "The Judgement of the Moon and Stars"
For personal song which allows you into someone else's head, almost anything by Joni. (but I have a special fondness for "The Same Situation" and "The Judgement of the Moon and Stars"
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'This town ain't big enough for the both of us' by Sparks!😄❤️
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I think probably BNB by Jeff Rosenstock, I think it’s a fantastic piece of songwriting
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"The Melting of the Sun" by St. Vincent.
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Layla
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@scottlake already mentioned Elbow, they have so many melodies and lyrical moments that I‘d give my left arm have written (well, not really, since then I wouldn’t be able to play them). To name just one I go with Great Expectations.
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Wichita Lineman - I’m with @charliecheney
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"Fell on Black Days" by Soundgarden. It's not my favorite song, it's not my favorite band, but it is just GOOD.
For me it's Secret Heart by Ron Sexsmith
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S4X_l8PIobc
Obviously, I love the actual song but it's also just a classic piece of songwriting where the lyrics, music and arrangement come to together beautifully. It's somehow close to perfect.