Caveman

by @erbaer

Liner Notes

#storycube

This was a Story Cube Challenge. The words were: dice, parachute, bowl of something hot, and the action was burying something.
I got the words yesterday and had fun putting the pieces together.
Thanks to @darcistrutt for the challenge.

Lyrics

Caveman

I’m a caveman
but I don’t know it
living in a hole in a boulder seems normal to me
and my few simple tools are perfectly suited
to do what I do
the paintings on my walls
are of every little thing that I see

And I worry
about sabertooth tigers
there’s sabertooth tigers out there somewhere
looking for a meal
So I run like the Dickens
throw a spear and try to stick it in a water buffalo
that would be enough you know
cut in little pieces for a season or so

I had dream one night
I was high above the ground
hanging from a cloud
looking all around

and that big volcano over there
was just a little tiny bowl of fire
as I drifted right by ‘er
I watched the smoke climb higher

I’m a caveman
amidst so many unknowns
but time will bury my bones
under dust and daily debris
I’m a caveman
but i don’t know it
no future archaeologists yet
to look back at me

Comments

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@jike
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Great, cleverly written lyrics with lovely ideas and topical references like "the sabertooth tiger". Sometimes I also imagine what someone 500 or 1000 years in the future will think of us and our way of life when looking back and looking at it from a future perspective... The melody is beautiful and very nicely laid-back, so enjoyable to listen to!
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@ayais
Sweet and simple. Nice irony.
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Hi-oh! (not sure how you'd spell it)
Nice and relaxed, so cool.
"amidst so many unknowns / but time will bury my bones / under dust and daily debris" Very well put.
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Such an enjoyable listen! The lyrics are playful, funny, and straight forward, and the delivery is a delight. And now I'm wondering what the heck a Story Cube Challenge is. I think I'M the caveman! The final verse is such a perfect send-off...
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I really like the first two lines. Of course a caveman wouldn’t think of themselves as such! Makes me wonder what we are that we don’t yet know. I really like this one. Fun and playful.
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You did an amazing job with your story cube challenge - I like the caveman perspective. Some delightful lines!! I like that strum as a backdrop for your great vocals! A nice laid back feel!
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The relaxed feel of this tune makes me imagine a caveman on a lazy day, not even aware that he is bored because boredom hasn't been invented yet. Usually I imagine them active. This is like a new take on the Jimmy Buffett tune, "I Pirate Looks at Forty" only switch out the pirate for a caveman.
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This needs to be a new standard in campfire singalongs!
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This puts that traditional campfire guitar song in a whole new light. If a Caveman had a guitar, is this what he would he sing? Fun to use as a metaphor for who you are in the now as well.
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Well done with your dice! I liked the relaxed feel of the story. The non word vocalizing really added. Great!
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Ahhh man this might be my new favorite of your songs. The bit about sabertooth tigers made me laugh and I like the flow of the dickens/water buffalo line. I love that the caveman tells us about this incredible dream and doesn't wonder what it means, but just goes back to his simple caveman thoughts. A+, good work!
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Dreamy and introspective feelings rising up in me. Chuckling a lil while also loving the sentiment of a caveman going about his day oblivious to this song. Simple but very effective chords and guitar playing working with the vocals
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Creative and fun! I love your imagination! Your songs take me to wonderful destinations each and every time. Nicely performed. Loved your chorus.
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whimsical and beautiful... great lyrics, melody, and your voice is soothing & fantastic
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What a lovely take on the challenge. Very pleasant listen. Beautiful singing and guitar.
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