Couldn't Sell It

by @fiteclub

Liner Notes

Based on a Turkish tradition. If you lose something you say out loud "The devil took it. The devil couldn't sell it. He has brought it back."

Lyrics

I remember you backlit by a porchlight
Folks know me with a floodlight in my face
These perspectives turned to warning
When I woke up in the morning
My heart beside me on my pillow case

The devil took it from me just last weekend
To be honest I’d forgot it at the bar
I knew that how I left it,
It was no use for his mischief
it was wrecked and old and dirty, like my car

Scratch he is a friend of mine from way back
We used to rock and roll back in old Lagrange
So when he didn’t clear a profit,
He came standing with his hand out,
Just like you he’s asking me for change

It’s a buyer’s market now as he would find out
He said he’d failed because he aimed too high
It was bruised bad from a hard fight
On the morning of a hard night
He never could have sold it, in the light

Scratch he’s a friend of mine from way back
We'd rock and roll when we were in Lagrange
When he didn’t clear a profit,
He came standing with his hand out,
Just like you he’s asking me for change

Forgotten things come back to us like heroes
Worn memories mend what’s been torn apart
But he gave up on the hustle
Returned my worthless muscle
On the pillow, my old wounded battered heart

Scratch he is a friend of mine from way back
You know we rocked and we rolled all around Lagrange
But he didn’t clear a profit,
so he’s standing with his hand out,
And just like you he’s asking me for change

Comments

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Wow. What an interesting Turkish phrase. We're in love with Capadocia, and planning to head there at some point. Great concept and development in the lyrics. Really enjoyed the storytelling.
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I think my favorite part is the change of lyric at the end from "asking me for change" to "asking me to change." It adds another layer of depth that was unexpected at that part. As always, your picking style is fantastic!
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I like this a lot. The style perfectly suits the topic and song writing. The reserved vocal delivery reminds me of John Prine. Well executed.
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@jorh
Great idea for a song, and executed brillianty. The contrast in the first two lines was a fab opened to get the listener hooked "I remember you backlit by a porchlight, Folks know me with a floodlight in my face". Nice how you brought back the pillow imagery in the last verse too - very clever.
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Wow, this is awesome singer-songwriter stuff! Brilliant lyrics and great delivery.
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@jbradleybush I famously get too explainy at the ends. You beat my wife to that observation, and I'll drop that line. Thank you!
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I liked these lyrics alot and now with this music it's even better!! You've done a fine job with this! I Love your vocals and the picked acoustic... Great job!!
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Love the song. Like the double verse trick to start with. The “asking me for change” line becomes so much more powerful. Great rhymes and near rhymes. I would personally leave off the last line that is a little too explainy to me. All in all, great job.
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