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by @flossy_dj

Liner Notes

I started this song last month but just tweaked the lyrics now. I want to fully finish it! Everyone here inspires me! #demo #emo #crybanger

Lyrics

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You left me upside down and shaking
Behind the smoke screen I created
Call you with courage in my bloodstream
It goes to voicemail on the first ring

My life feels like a movie
And we are on the last scene
I wasted all my energy
Trying to play the role of me

This self inflicted damage
I think I've had enough
I hope that you get this message
I'm about to self destruct

I got no friends to say good bye to
Cuz the only one I want is you
And they'll say that I asked for this
Burned my bridges now there's nothing left

My life feels like a movie
And we are on the last scene
I wasted all my energy
Trying to play the role of me

This self inflicted damage
I think I've had enough
I hope that you get this message
I'm about to self destruct

Comments

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@metalfoot
Great groove, energy, build and feel to this track. Solid lyric too. Two thumbs up!
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@jorh
The build into the chorus is so great and then it just erupts after each one - sounds awesome! I also like the clicking sounds you added into the verses to mix it up and keep them sonically interesting. I like how you keep the melody quite consistent in the verses, it fits with the lyric and makes the chorus pay off that much more
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@nilsjesper
I love the mood of this track and how it peaks and comes back down. Great vocals.
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@dutchwind
Nice! Great track. Love the finger snaps in particular.
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@andrea
Very relatable lyrics set in a phone call. That works really nicely. I enjoyed the music, and your voice is wonderful. I like it!
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@headfirstonlyMod
I'm always a sucker for synthpop and vintage drum machine sounds. Nice how the fire imagery returns from "smoke screen" to "burned my bridges." Great vocals, too. I'm getting a distinctly She Makes War/Penfrind vibe from them. Great job!
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@sp4cek4a3n
the lyrics are totally perfect for this kind of music. great timbres, great vibe, great vocals.
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@chldomn5
Liking how this builds up, its got a great structure that flows and drops and picks up with the differing instruments. "" My life feels like a movie
And we are on the last scene "" is an awesome painted picture in my mind. Great piece here
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