The First

by @willyviste

Liner Notes

Tags:
#fawmtronica #synth #synthpop #electronic #pop #vocals #slightlyconfusing???

Alrighy, heres a tune I've been working on for the last days now. Quite happy overall, except with the clarity of the lyrics, and the arrangement/structure. I will consider them strictly demo. I had a vague feeling with the lyrics, but I feel like it's so over the place and random. And the structure, I want it to be longer.

I tend to throw a lot of things into a song, but then I'm afraid to loose perspective. Like, when is to ear-candy, to much earcandy? I don't seem to know...
Would love some criticism about the pace of the song. Like, does it feel a bit much sometimes? Does it make sense to y'all?

The rest, I'm pretty happy with, and I hope you'll enjoy it:)

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Other info:
The initial synth-theme was made with some MIDI to my newly accuired Deepmind 12 D. Really fun to jam on. Made some drums, tweaked the saw-stabs for hours, made some janky lyrics with a LiTle sPriNklE oF *aUtOTunE*. Don't care too much tho;) It's a demo afterall. The earcandy, edits and transitions. Structure-stuff. Yeah...:)
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Lyrics

Verse:
You are the one.
The feeling that strikes me when walking through the cities .
You, keep me down. Rooted in spaces, in neat tiny cases.

Pre:
Fall, down
Seemingly pointing, puzzling and jointing.
The tide that we never would turn.

Chorus:
But you are the one...
You are the one,
And I'm missing you so bad, please can you come back?
You are the one, that holds me safely, make me turn to good.

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Verse:

Ref:

Outro:
Fall, down
Seemingly pointing, puzzling and jointing.
The tide that you helped me to turn.

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