Truth (hurts) #quickie

by @chrisra

Liner Notes

just nnever been in till day 5 b4
silly..might grow it x
page one ...ooh rah!🙃🙃🫠

Lyrics

Davey said to Jane
I'm sick of all I've seen

and she said ..... ,not really,
Why dont you just take me down the lake and bend...........

(or did she 🤍)

Comments

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"take me down the lake" is the kind of lyric that really appeals to me. I like the casual mood you've set -- I definitely think you could build it out if you want.
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hahaha, this is so funny!
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Well that was more than the songs length, it has humour and is pretty refreshing for the shortness. What it has in making me laugh makes up for the realisation that it's a few seconds long. The title gives it a new meaning having looked it up after hearing your voice also 😀
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interesting plot twist in the end. short but powerful. congrats on your first fawm song.
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Whoa! You've got me smiling ear to ear first thing this morning. It's short. Super short. But I love short songs. The barely awake vocal suits it well, too.
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