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Thanks for the critique @baxy. Definitely hear that in the second half where the mood just shifts drastically after giving it a couple more listens. Taking notes for the next track. Thanks again.

Hi. I really liked parts of it by themselves. Like that rhythmical support of upper voice by dum dum on 3 and 4 after 2:00. Lovely.

That stop at 1:05 hit me like cold water, the groove is gone lads!

Was a bit put off by the connection of parts. F.e. dum-dum beat hits hardest at the start, and then suddenly stops, and then feels weaker. Feels as if synths slowly overtake the drum groove. Perhaps if drum progressed (soft but elaborate at start -> hard but less later) it would catch me better.