FAWM: "Ever since you disappeared you appeared everywhere"

Ever since you disappeared you appeared everywhere

3 weeks ago by @lemoan

Liner Notes

Warning: Very loud⚠️

I attempted to write lyrics for this song but it took a completely different turn! When I distorted the drums heavily, I decided to commit to the idea of having everything else sound like it was distorted, not sure how to feel about this one... criticism needed.

Comments

@brocolio0000 2w

I like distortion a lot, I like the idea, and those distorted drums fit really well, but I think you can try adding a little of anticipation (like a quiet distorted line that evolves to the distorted drums) and probably leave some feedback when going back to clean part again.

@theenglishassassin 3w

I love the juxtaposition of the sweet opening and the very distorted sounds that come in later. My one thought is that maybe the drums are a bit too distorted. I like the distortion, but maybe they can still sound more like drums. Hope that's helpful.
PS - Love the title, too.

@fangirlshipper 3w

This was amazing! I love the feel of the distortion in the feeling of the music, it's such a great melancholy space vibe.

@sadloaf 3w

I think the distortion really adds to the ennui of the song and makes the title make a lot of sense. If anything I would lean in MORE to the distortion, maybe add a second part later in the song that gets even crunchier. Looking forward to more.

@nkrefting 3w

I hope you stick with this one! You can really luxuriate in that beginning part (I still can hear a voice there!) and then that distorted part is a great bridge/climax to build towards. This is great!!!

@knobbyneggins815 3w

Love the steady echo at the start, it's beautiful! This feels like the start of an album and a journey. I love the distortion, it was a great choice, it really hits you at the perfect time and disappears just as fast. Wonderful vibes.