FAWM: "Heaven"

Heaven

3 weeks ago by @cjk

Skirmish: Heaven (@atornberg)

Heaven

cjk

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Liner Notes

Just a silly thing that popped up when I read the prompt 'Heaven' and immediately thought of a sea of clouds.
#skirmish #heaven #filk #needsmusic #collaborationswelcome
Edit: 9. February 2025 put music to it
#acousticonetake #singersongwriter #personwithguitar

Lyrics

Heaven

Some say there is no heaven
but those have never been on a plane
cause beneath the sky, far above the earth
lies a heavenly domain

Its ground is made of cushy clouds
a sea of endless white
by night the stars are sparkling gems
by day the sun shines bright

At dawn there are multiple colors
that flow over the fluffy ground
and at dusk they come back again
just the other way around

Of course no human can live there
We can only look and dreamily sigh
after all this is heaven
not a place for you or I

(c) lyrics 4. February 2025 by C.J. Ueberall
(c) tune 9. February 2025 by C.J. Ueberall

Comments

@jgale 5d

This song feels like a beautiful daydream. <3

@dannen 2w

nice song, nice fingerpicking

@cjk 2w

Thanks @janeg @ceilidh @andygetch @atornberg @johnkaniecki for your comments to my song "Heaven", it has now a tune.

@janeg 2w

There's a spot in southern Ontario where I've watched hawks soar above the clouds and imagined how wonderful that would be. Now I know!

@ceilidh 2w

Nice poetry! They looks so fluffy, until you fly through them and see the rain on the windows! The final verse is like the cherry on top. Love it! Hope to hear a demo.