The Raggedy Man
by @roblyon5150
Skirmish: Mine the Poets (@dudachris)Liner Notes
#fawm #skirmish #minethepoets This is a good Skirmish for an English or Lit major, which I am not. I did draw from one of my favorite poems by James Whitcomb Riley, The Hoosier Poet. I thought I would try to pay a little homage to him, being from Indiana and all. I couldn't come up with much, so I went with the "Smack My Bitch Up" route. This is what got in an hour. It will most likely be discarded in mid March. It was still fun to make.
Lyrics
The goodest man ever you saw.
Raggedy, Raggedy, Raggedy man.
Comments
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@roblyon5150
@kaminokai ah! I was looking by your name. I had it. I'll get it to you by the end of the week
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@roblyon5150 I sent you a gmail, let me know if you got it. Ja.
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@kaminokai I certainly thought I did. But can't seem to find it.
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@roblyon5150 cool. You still have my email, right?
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@kaminokai worst case, I'll send you the file. I'm glad you dig it. It's not my least favorite song this year, but it's close. I don't usually delete anything ever.
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@roblyon5150 nope. just "add to playlist" and "play next." I dig this song. I'd hate for you to delete. Maybe you can put it up as a single on the BandCamp, and I can buy it that way. :)
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@kaminokai Look at the bottom right corner of the cover photo. Should be 3 little dots and you do it there. At least that's how it is on my web browser.
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Hey Rob, how do I download it? I am on BandLab, but I don't see a download button...
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@tjeff @kaminokai @musicsongwriter @nightwing521 @smudge @dudachris
Thank you all very much. And it's really cool that you checked out the original poem, too. You are all welcome to download this song if you want. If not no worries. But I imagine after FAWM, this one is going straight to the trash.
Thank you all very much. And it's really cool that you checked out the original poem, too. You are all welcome to download this song if you want. If not no worries. But I imagine after FAWM, this one is going straight to the trash.
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Cool groove and sound, and reminds me a bit of the recordings Bill Laswell's group Material did with William S. Burroughs narrating.
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Reminds me of some of Bowie’s avant-garde stuff. Like from Omikron or Outside. Very cool.
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I can imagine your music as a game track. Dynamic and busy.
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After listening to your piece and then reading the poem (which I had not before), they both capture the energy of the hired man who plays with the children. Good write! Good vibe!!!
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Neat vibe! High energy. Fun. I like the build! Felt like I was inside a video game (in a good way). Nice job! Cheers, Smudgie
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Wooosh, went to find the poem and there's as much going on there as in your piece. I think it is well captured and very cool to listen to. I have no idea how you get all those awesome sounds but it sure is fun to listen to 🎧