FAWM: "Oh Sweet Honey"

Oh Sweet Honey

Liner Notes

This is the challenge about a poisonous plant. My plant was Honey Bush.
#poisonerchallenge #needsmusic #needscollab #needsvocals

Lyrics

Oh Sweet Honey

Chorus
Oh sweet honey
You came into my life for a reason
You showed me a way to change my life
The bitterest pill was sweetened

When I looked at her
Sweet sweet face
I never thought the
Rumours were true
We shared a bed
She was in my head
Then I learnt I was a fool

I sat back and watched her swallow
Her eyes shifting
Her promises were hollow

Chorus
Oh sweet honey
You came into my life for a reason
You showed me a way to change my life
The bitterest pill was sweetened

Yeh I found my sweet
Honey bush
You were beautiful
So fresh and new
I chopped you up
In the name of love
Then added you to her food

I sat back and watched her swallow
Her eyes shifting
Her promises were hollow

Chorus
Oh sweet honey
You came into my life for a reason
You showed me a way to change my life
The bitterest pill was sweetened

My love is for the
Honey bush
It helped put an end to us
And for this
I’ll be forever grateful
She’s six foot under
And my life is stable

I sat back and watched her swallow
Her eyes shifting
Her promises were hollow

Chorus
Oh sweet honey
You came into my life for a reason
You showed me a way to change my life
The bitterest pill was sweetened

Comments

@writeandwrong 1w

I absolutely love how you humanized the plant. Such a brilliant storyline and smooth flow. The music was fantastic too! You really nailed the challenge, great job all around!

@nwhosings 1w

The way the melody shifts in mood works so well against that walking bass. Great lyrics and a timeless story made new by a poisonous plant, hehehe

@leslie 1w

I really like the idea of giving the plant a part in the story. Cool collab, you two. Thank you for joining the challenge!

@fb2studios 1w

@cicpisces demo up, hope it is ok

@fb2studios 2w

I can hear a blues song here so if you're happy with that I'll sort out some music asap and post it

@hmstreetteam 2w

This is cleverly put together, especially the title. It took a minute for me to work out who was who and find that the poisonous plant was a party to a love triangle situation. That’s good storytelling.