I like this a lot!! the square-ish synth tone is very good and I dig the glockenspiel a lot in the arrangement. one of my favorite types of song is long ones that have one tiny bit of vocal, and this suits that very well to me.

Really neat track, from the very first second! The unusual chord selections kept my interest, and it's pretty neat to only have a few words of lyrics at the end of the song.

I totally get the desire to stamp a song 'DONE' in order to stay on track with FAWM, and that's kind of the beauty of this challenge! I appreciate that I don't have time to be too precious with the songs I'm making and just get them out the door. March is for polish!

Speaking of polish, I could definitely hear the lyrics benefiting from more elaboration from a production standpoint. Maybe harmonies, or delays or something.

Keep up the great work. Looking forward to hearing more!

This is cool, nice groove and I dig the imperfection of it all. There synth melody interplaying with the rhythm chords is very well done. Good job on the on/off synth and percussive little harmonies and arpeggios. Somehow you manage to keep the song unfolding and going to new places.

This is a really nice groove. I love the bass line in particular, and the arrangement around it really grows nicely. Great job!