Not A Ton

by @analogj

Challenge: PALINDROME

Liner Notes

This a funny song inspired by the Palindrome weekly challenge. I've been down with the flu for a couple of weeks, so I'm just getting back into writing. When I saw the Palindrome challenge, well I love wordplay. Enjoy this little ditty.

Lyrics

Did I like it? Not a ton.
Was it funny? Not that fun.
Was it exciting? At least the good guy won!
Did I like it? Not a ton.

Was it cozy? Not a ton.
Was it warm? Well, in the sun.
It left me burning in a bun.
Was it cozy? Not a ton.

Was it tasty? Not a ton.
Was it luscious? A bit like scum.
Was it sweet? More like chum.
Was it tasty? Not a ton.

Did this take long? Not a ton.
The song is lean. It's skeleton.
It's almost over, not overdone.
Did this take long? Not a ton.

Comments

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Clever lyric, and some fun wordplay. Catchy melody too. I enjoyed listening.
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Really love your voice and the uke. You’ve got a great sense of rhyme that I’m enjoying across your songs. Well done!
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Yeah, what @leslie333 said. Fun. I need to do more songs with standard formats.
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Cute song! Liked 'more like chum" and the whole last verse especially!
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