Targets

by @motorcitymusicman

There is no demo for this song.

Liner Notes

Warning -- this song is about gun violence, so anyone not wanting to read about that shouldn't proceed further.

This song arose out of the #movietitlechallenge. My draw for this year was "Targets." I had never heard of this movie, so some research was required. It turned out this 1968 Roger Corman-produced film was the very early directorial debut of Peter Bogdanovich, who would later go on to direct movies like The Last Picture Show, What's Up, Doc?, and Paper Moon.

The plot of the movie is based on Charles Whitman, who was the perpetrator in the 1966 Tower shootings at the University of Texas. In the movie, the character commits a mass shooting at a drive-in theatre and, at the end, when captured, states with satisfaction that he "hardly ever missed." My research into the plot of the movie and the University of Texas shooting (along with the assigned title) is what motivated the song.

Thanks very much to @wacha for setting up and administering the movie title challenge. This is the second time I've participated, and I've enjoyed it both times. Kind of a dark way to start off FAWM, but kind of important as well.

This song is #lyricsonly.

Lyrics

Verse One:

It’s all laid out in front of him, components on the bed
The written manifesto, they’ll remember what he said
He packs up his AR-15, he takes his H & K
The duffel bag is crimson and the case gun-metal gray
The bag contains a pistol, and a jacket patterned camo
And several dozen magazines already filled with ammo
He tosses in a bump stock and a telescopic sight
Throws the bag over his shoulder as he steals into the night

Chorus:

To him we’re all just targets
That’s all we’ll ever be
To him we’re all just targets
That’s all he’ll ever see
The evil is eternal
And it’s hard to comprehend
To him we’re all just targets
When will this ever end?

Verse Two:

The traffic isn’t heavy in the early morning hour
The sun has barely risen as he pulls up to the tower
He nods his head politely at the folks he passes by
He walks into the staircase and climbs toward the sky
The rooftop is deserted, and his lines of sight are clear
He sets up his equipment, double-checking all his gear
He locks and loads a magazine and focuses the wire
He switches off the safety and he starts to open fire

[repeat chorus]

Bridge:

In the end he didn’t die
The cops had stormed the rooftop, and he chose not to resist
He never said the reason why
He only smiled and boasted that he hardly ever missed

[repeat chorus]

Comments

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To me, the lasting image here is the nodding to strangers and the smile and boast at the end...that disconnect between the brutal action and the attitude.
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Okay, I put some chords to this and listed you as a collaborator. If you hate it, LMK and I'll take it down. Thanks for the opportunity.
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Well told. So descriptive and appropriate for our times. I'm calling to mind, not fondly, the multitude of mass shooters we have in the states. I'm not sure it's a movie I want to see but I like your lyrics.
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Oh boy! What incredible imagery and rhyming. I read these words out loud, because it felt to me like they had to be heard. They roll off the tongue and fit together beautifully, and they paint such a clear and disturbing picture. What a beautiful and powerful set of lyrics. Bravo!
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Wow, great lyrics. I jumped to your stuff because of the kind words you posted on mine. I can definitely hear music in the reading. Mind if I put some chords to it? Also, I did not read your part about the movie because I wanted to not know too much before I read the lyrics. The chorus is so great, I wonder if "evil" is the right word. Is that the same as indoctrinated ignorance?
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This is a dark and brilliant take on the title which is itself, a dark movie. You're lyrics are so descriptive and make me like I am right there with him. Very well done, thanks for participating!
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Well told. The lyric sets the scene. Good contrast between song sections.
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You stayed on the story and told it chronologically with consistent language. I can hear this rhythm and meter being sung.
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Wow. Great and evocative writing. Too timely but yeah - well done.
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Nice work on the movie title challenge! Timely, unfortunately events of the world today but a reminder that it also was happening back then. Written with vivid imagery that made me see everything. Well done 🎵
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