Through The Window

by @rocketgrrrl

Skirmish: Didn't press send (@richardmasters)
Through The Window
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Liner Notes

#acapella #onetake #skirmish

Wrote and recorded this in about forty minutes while on my walk in the woods.

I sort of imagined this as #scifi with a transporter, but it’s far too real right now for me too.

Just a bit more info on that now that I'm home and can type: The concept was of a woman standing at the window of a space station, trying to decide if she would, this time, press send on the transporter beam and send herself out there, far away - likely never to return.

I'm in the same situation right now, facing the choice between the dissolution of my very self or taking that step and finding a new future, far away.

I’ll put this onto sheet music and write harmony/accompaniment another time, after FAWM. Then I’ll be consistent with the melody :)

Lyrics

Through the window
Jemma Kline

Starry night through the window
Galaxies I could see
Years have passed and still, I’m waiting
Waiting for my time to leave

Always knew that I was bound for distant Shores
Always dreamed that I was meant for something more
I always felt The longing pulling me ahead
Always wished upon the wonders overhead

Starry night through the window
Galaxies I could see
Years have passed and still, I’m waiting
Waiting for my time to leave

Never knew that I could simply walk away
never dreamed I never get to leave this place
Never felt that I would ever have the right
Never wished i’d have to choose to flee or fight

Starry night through the window
Galaxies I could see
Years have passed and still, I’m waiting
Waiting for my time to leave

Now here I am with one last chance
With one last hope with one last path
For the message that was written was me
Is it time to now press send or press delete

Starry night through the window
Galaxies I could see
Years have passed and still, I’m waiting
Waiting for my time to leave

Comments

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Pretty melody - it's fun to hear you singing in the woods. Interesting angle with the sci-fi aspect, I enjoyed the story in your lyric.
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I love the introspection and the dreams of the future. Really lovely take on the prompt with a gorgeous melody and tender vocals.
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@metalfoot pretty sure it’s on your end. It does have about five seconds of white space at the start since I was recording on my phone. Perhaps others can confirm that there’s audio; the interface is telling me 2 1/2 minutes of recording length.
Thank you for the comments though! I’m glad you liked the lyrical construction. It all started with a chorus for me.
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I love the juxtaposition of longing for space travel and a more immediate conflict, and the ending that reveals the way that the two are not really separate from each other. Very poetically put.
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The audio isn't working for me (probably an issue at my end) but I really like this lyrical construction, especially in the chorus.
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Some nice rhyming and some very thought provoking lyrics too. Always a sucker for thoughts about galaxies and the bigger picture. Good skirmishing!
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