◄1► spirits in the gallery

by @burr Mod

◄1► spirits in the gallery
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Liner Notes

i'm blowing out the cobwebs by catching up on projects my overloaded 2024 self wasn't able to follow through on last 50/90 challenge.

🚨 weird alert 🚨

i had an ambitious idea to do a #CommentsFirst #Cassette #4Track #Feast so i posted not one but FOUR #Titular titles and let people go nuts.

then, once the prompts came in... i sort of saw a narrative emerge and decided to try a mini "concept EP" that tells a story, on top of the cassette and comment constraints. why? because i'm a glutton for punishment.

this ended up being very ambitious and, while fun, results were mixed. i don't think i'll try this combo of constraints again! 😅 i kinda had to "cheat" from time to time either pre-sequencing some parts in a DAW or playing VST instruments and then routing the audio to the deck, since i don't have (or even know how to play) some of the instruments i was prompted to use.

original comment prompts from last summer:
[...]

the tracks & instruments:
T1 ► univox sr-55 drum machine
T2 ► accordion VST (recorded backward)
T3 ► guitar
T4 ► vocals / kazoo (autotuned!) / live drums

all the songs are:
1 ◉ THIS!
2 ► https://write.fawm.org/songs/309130
3 ► https://write.fawm.org/songs/309131
4 ► https://write.fawm.org/songs/309132

Lyrics

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this is FIRST in the series. in which we meet our narrator who is an alien anthropologist fascinated with the work of an artist who fabricates alien artifacts not unlike those he studies.

the original title i was given from titular was "through the spirits" but in the end i changed it, while sticking to the prompts. song structure on this one is all over the place because recording backwards with just a drum machine was hard. in general this one is pretty ad-libbed and most of the recordings are first takes. the live drums was to try and make the long outro less monotonous. it's a miracle that i stopped playing both guitar and drums just as the drum machine ended.

i didn't even consider trying to the greenbaum/police samples. the "polyrhythms" are in the bridge/kazoo solo (not the chorus) and it's really just mashing buttons on the drum machine to add a waltz on top of the other rhythm preset. and who knew that a kazoo played through a hard pitch-correcting vocal effect pedal would sound kinda like a saxophone?

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alien ambers
enveloping me
i trace out the lifelines
as they secretly, silently sweep through…

spirits in the gallery
drunk and and staring back at me
like static in a memory
lost in what i see

odor of ethereal ozone
a puzzle missing a part
(in a work of art)
traces of language carved in stone
wanting to be known by…

spirits in the gallery
drunk and and staring back at me
like static in a memory
lost in what i see

Comments

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Haunting write that captures spirits as well as prods them a reader's way with finesse, @burr . Cryptic music and vocals rock the eerie in play. Nice interstellar-like song experience!
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I love the reversed accordion! The kazoo is so weird but cool
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Somehow you turned those comments into something chill, warm, and more than the sum of its parts. I would seriously listen to an album of this.

Great lyrics and great sounds! I agree with @sapient - the autotuned kazoo sounds like a vintage synth "horn" sound.
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You create a beautiful hybrid with the organic and electronic tones blending beautifully. I think the analog tape helps too. This well seasoned stew actually serves well towards the world building you are doing in this series.
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I kind of really love this. And the kazoo sounds super cool with that effect! The chorus is really cool + also pretty catchy. My favorite lines are:

a puzzle missing a part
(in a work of art)
traces of language carved in stone

I'm really glad you got back to this. I have listened a couple of times!
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It's hard to credit that you could even work within these constraints, let alone pull something this cool out of the hat.
And that kazoo? More like "very expensive vintage synth" 🤣
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Ooh it’s spacey and ethereal and the lyrics are deliciously vague to match the vibes!
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Dig this, very dreamy and very ageless , at times it feels like a hidden 80s gothic alternative pop gem, 90’s lofi singer songwriter and then the very 00’s auto tuned kazoo rattles that experience. Great stuff
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Ok now this is a fantastic way to do a comments first challenge. Great use of the prompts here.
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This is dreamy. You certainly nailed the brief.
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Well played! You got plenty and it’s so coherent and pretty! Really well done!
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yay you got loads (all??) of the comments covered! I could definitely hear the harmonics chinks and it all sounded great. Nice one Burr!
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As one of the people partly to blame for this song, this is a lot of fun and I'm impressed what you *were* able to do given the self-imposed constraints.
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