FAWM: "Shine Shine Shine"

Shine Shine Shine

1 week ago by @lowhum

Liner Notes

This morphs @sapient morph: https://write.fawm.org/songs/310038
Took away everything. Added about 50 %.
#morph #country #acousticonetake

Lyrics

All I want to do
is put you in a shrine
So like a little crazy god
you shine shine shine

Hallowed be thy name, baby
scattered by the wind
nectar and ambrosia
be thy daily drink

Never had no future, baby
I was lost at sea
Until your angel wings
spread all over me

You offered me comfort
wiped away my tears
Gave me a couple o' kisses
And gently disappeared

Comments

@frozenlonesome 1d

This is a cool spin on the previous morph. I really liked your playing and singing too.

@ragbag 1d

This is a great morph - takes things in a completely different direction whilst retaining elements of the previous song. Love the light touch on the guitar, the uptempo fun feel and playful lyrics. Loved it:-)

@chrismyth02 3d

This was a fun track to morph. Contagious energy in the bouncy verse and chorus. Great playin and singing. Love what you were able to pull from the previous track and make it your own.

@wacha 5d

I love the direction you took this morph, it drastically changes the tone from the previous song and is light and airy. This is some solid toe tapping goodness. Nice work!

@coolparadisoMod 1w

Yup tidy picking! I’m sure I have said before I used to listen to guy on a show many years ago, he played one song each show! This is one he would love to have done. Good stuff.

@bradbrubaker 1w

That's some nice picking you're doing on that guitar. Can't say I expected the morph to go in all of the many directions it has. I like how yours brings us back to (tiki) gods, haha, whether intentional or not.

@klyma 1w

I liked the title and was curious. What a fun toe tapper. That chorus is aces.

@leepat 1w

love this Dylan-esque side of you, rarely seen and heard.
a beguiling simplicity yet freshness to the lyrics here, coupled with the easygoing guitar.
fun!